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1 Tried to make a few things... on Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:31 am

seniorpibb

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Some stuff I've made recently, yeah I know I'm not very good at this...


These two I was just trying a different style than normal:

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 A signature I made for some random guy who made a request thread on a forum:

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And an avy I made cause I got bored and need to learn how to make them:

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Can I please have some CnC on these?

2 Re: Tried to make a few things... on Wed Jul 03, 2013 6:09 am

pack5642

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that baby one is creeeeeepy lol. i think the light should've started shining from the lighter, it would've looked cooler. i like bg though, awesome fog and the text fits in well because of its colors.

the purple girl sig looks really awesome. bg has nice color and fits with the render. i guess you could've positioned her a bit more to the bottom left and let the text go off her fingers, but you did a nice job with the render placement. the cursive text is kinda small and hard to read. overall nice blending and an awesome bg that fits with the render.

the soldier dude has awesome blending and a great job with the render placement. the render really fits with the bg. sig has great flow and the text follows that too. although the text placement is weird. and what is that random light source doin there?
avy has great lightening and its simple. guess you could have done something with the bg.

3 Re: Tried to make a few things... on Wed Jul 03, 2013 7:07 am

seniorpibb

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Thanks, I'm not good with text placement lol, and if you're talking about the random orange light on him, it's part of the render I used:

 
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4 Re: Tried to make a few things... on Wed Jul 03, 2013 10:08 am

Shivam

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The baby one has got nice blending, good text, good lighting and it looks just a bit lifeless... But I guess that's what you wanted to make. Razz

Morrigan one has only one little problem, the text placement. Other then that, it's awesome.
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That random light On the soldier guy looks bad, try to get rid of with brush tool.

Avy looks simple, yet nice. No comment on it.

5 Re: Tried to make a few things... on Wed Jul 03, 2013 10:22 am

Maxlance

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Lightning
1st .  Nice focal blending depth

2nd  Needs blending flow depth focal

3rd render nice but needs work on your part

4th one of the best avy I have seen ..you can add some little effects with brush +filter



6 Re: Tried to make a few things... on Wed Jul 03, 2013 5:33 pm

seniorpibb

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Thanks for the comments and advice guys Very Happy

7 Re: Tried to make a few things... on Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:08 pm

Watta

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Dat avi yo 

8 Re: Tried to make a few things... on Wed Jul 03, 2013 10:33 pm

Zenesis

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your sig look nice but lighting need more work and text didn't fit, KIU

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