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1 The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 12:14 pm

Shivam

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The title said it. Now post your C&Cs on these A-W-E-S-O-M-E things xD.

2 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 12:18 pm

Shivam

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Okay, the first signature is...

Death the Kid!!





C&C Smile





3 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 12:56 pm

Maxlance

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Lightning
Simply Amazing !
One of your bests !
This is completely new from you !
The brightness control is superb !

It deserves 10/10 ! Very Happy




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4 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 1:06 pm

Shivam

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Wow, my first perfect Very Happy Very Happy

Than~ks <3

5 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 7:20 pm

Mario

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Lightning
Mind blowin',just one thing,I dislike the font.
9/10



6 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 7:59 pm

Shivam

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Thanks.
I can't use my own Laptop so I had to make do with what I got.

7 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 9:15 pm

G man

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Now let's see here...
Render is a bit too sharpen. It's nice to sharpen your render but not too much.
I didn't like the white lights on his head, the don't fit well enough.
The text is really "meh", and the green text should be siler.
The golw is a bit overdone, try setting it to color dodge and lower the ocpacity.
The background can have more effects imo.
Overall good work.
7.5/10.

8 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 9:54 pm

Shivam

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I didn't relised that I sharpened too much, good thing that I got bored or else I would've done more... And when you said "white lights", did you meant those 3 stripes in his hair? If yes, then please google "Death the Kid" and you'll understand why they're there.

Again, I can't really do anything about text and I like to keep my signatures clean and simple, so I didn't used many effects Very Happy

Thanks for C&C, 1

9 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 10:06 pm

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Lightning
As Gman said , text is thick...

When you get on your laptop, you can try to reduce the text thickening which is required to improve the clarity. Very Happy

10 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun May 26, 2013 11:49 pm

Shivam

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I plan on doing that. Can anyone tell what should I do to make text better?

11 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Mon May 27, 2013 12:15 am

Maxlance

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Lightning
Just wait till next Sunday ..
After that I will be completely free and will help you to improve the text ...

12 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Mon May 27, 2013 12:26 am

G man

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Try making the text colors about the same as the render's, for a start.

13 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Mon May 27, 2013 4:35 pm

Zenesis

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font depend on render

14 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 01, 2013 12:57 pm

Shivam

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Just remembered I haven't post it here yet so, posted here now.

15 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 01, 2013 1:02 pm

Zenesis

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look nice =_= the border draw more focal than render (darken color for border), good work btw

16 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun Jun 02, 2013 12:39 am

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Hey, I really like the Death the Kid sig, I think it looks great and the border seals the deal. Although I dislike the text as well Razz The positioning is nice but the font and the gradient to black - it's alright on the 'Death' but on the 'The' it's much harder to read. The green stands out as well, it should be muted a little.

I agree with the others about sharpening as well. Sharpen your focal or whatever you want to draw attention to, don't sharpen it all. I didn't completely notice at first, but on the left gun of 'Death the Kid' (as well as other places) and the lines of Ichigo's clothing, you can see individual pixels. They may have been there originally but sharpening accentuates the effect. Don't sharpen so much that you lose nice smooth lines Smile

17 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun Jun 02, 2013 1:09 am

Maxlance

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The bg and the shirt colour : Awesome
Eyes need improvement though...



18 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 12:29 pm

Shivam

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Thanks for the comments. Here are two new things.

Mio Avy,



and a Signature that I made by trying to copy Zee-chan's style,

19 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:04 pm

Zenesis

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now i only C&C at showcase =_=
Avatar : look nice but i didn't like text much,
Signature : my style ? you mean this ?
Spoiler:

=_= can you feel the different ? well you choose a bad render =_= when you put c4d make sure it follow the flow (from render) and contrast look bad =_= KIU

Some Good Quality Gia Render:


20 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:20 pm

Shivam

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Thanks for C&C and Renders. I'll make new one later.
+1

21 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:22 pm

Zenesis

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welcome, can't wait to see it =_=

22 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:23 pm

Mario

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Lightning
Ava: truly awesome..exept for the thing around the text, maybe add stroke on the opacity of 1.I would give it a....9/10.

sign: awesome blending but the render is pixlated and there is no text.. so a.....7/10. hope i helped!



23 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Tue Jun 04, 2013 2:34 pm

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nice Shivam, you are improving ! Smile

24 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Wed Jun 05, 2013 3:00 am

Maxlance

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Shivam : Can you post the render of your avatar ? Very Happy



25 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Wed Jun 05, 2013 10:55 am

Shivam

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Here ya go.

Spoiler:

26 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Thu Jun 06, 2013 10:05 am

Maxlance

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Lightning
Thanx..+1 ! Razz



27 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Thu Jun 06, 2013 10:31 am

Shivam

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No problem. Anyway, here's the new avy I made.

28 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Thu Jun 06, 2013 10:48 am

Maxlance

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Looks nice Very Happy .( Although doesn't have any resemblance to a ghost) Razz

I'll pm you something..see that ! Very Happy



29 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Thu Jun 06, 2013 10:50 am

Zenesis

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text need to blend more

30 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 6:14 pm

Shivam

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Thanks for the comments ^^

Here a new one.



C&C, please.

31 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:44 pm

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i think its awesome, but a bit too bright/sharp, 8.5/10

32 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:56 pm

Shivam

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I wanted to make it bright-ish, but I think I over did it. Razz

33 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:56 pm

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yeah, it hurts my eyes Razz

34 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 8:05 pm

Shivam

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Ooh, so I got weapon that can hurt eyes. Awesome.

Thanks for the C&C, by the way.

35 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:45 pm

Maxlance

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Lightning
Shivam: Do you use photoshop (which version) or GIMP ?



36 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 10:05 pm

Shivam

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I use Photoshop, CS4 and CS6.

37 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 10:39 pm

Maxlance

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Lightning
Undoubtedly,the lighting is TOOOOOOOOOO Much.. No

Even then Your signature will become 11/10 if you just apply the steps that I'm PMing you...Read carefully and apply exactly and

SEE THE MAGIC ! Very Happy



38 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:05 pm

Shivam

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New version. (Thanks, Maxie <3)

39 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:29 pm

Maxlance

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Lightning
You're welcome ! Very Happy



40 Re: The Arts of Shivam on Sun Jun 09, 2013 12:10 am

Shivam

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@Max: Screw what I said before! It looks amazing. Thank you so~ much.

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